Wednesday, October 15, 2008

Blue and Gold

i bleed blue with golden flecks.
cuz i know its true.
i know i bleed the color of your eyes.
you prick my finger
and it is clear
i knew it all along
i bleed the color of your eyes.
you look at me in disbelief.
i see your eyes darken to a stormy shade
and there goes my heart
when you cut it with your blade.
it adjusts to your eyes.
i laugh at the look on your face
i ask you if you didnt believe me
you shake your head
and we're in a pool of blue now
with golden flecks swirling around.
this blood is beautiful
but it doesnt hurt
it doesnt drain my heart.
it simply gives me that dizzy feeling.
when i know i'm in love.
you touch the wound over my heart
and ask if it was because of you
i nod my head and look into those blue pools
you desperately try to stop the bleeding.
you look at my heart
you look in my eyes
you lean in
you kiss me
and take my breath away
and there's no more blood
no more blue and gold reaching our ankles
your eyes are closed.
mine are too.
and we float.
and i open my eyes
i see the blue. i see the gold.
but its only in your eyes.
you healed my heart.



that is so morbid. lol. but i think i might like it..maybe.

2 comments:

May-Belle said...

good strong images.
i like the repeition and you held to one metaphor.
maybe try doing a different font to emphasize different speakers but other than that...well don.
i like it.

Candle in the Dark said...

thank u for the advice:) i respect your opinion so much :)